Ideas that I had:
- Beginning edit, forced - he shouldn't be in it twice. Edit a new one that has him intergrated and edited in far more smoothly.
- The typing shot doesn't look authentic, not enough comments around it - correction go on famous youtuber's channel called Jack to capture the footage
- Credits are never together in a trailer, they're used as ways of breaking up shots
- Change the titles, look more fancy - end title looks jarring - doesn't fit with the dark end to the trailer
- Pan on the skirt, Bennett then Weald uniform.
- Change location of skirt pan shot to library or something more academic looking
Teacher Feedback:
- Change location of skirt pan shot to library or something more academic looking
- Change the tag line
- Fonts need to be consistent
- Darkweb scene goes on for too long, excess footage at the end
- Finish with him going, "like and subscribe" twisted ending that fits with the story and tone of the rest of the trailer.
- Court shot doesn't look like a court, black background - maybe film in a glass booth ?
- For the credits they should not have the characters' names in there
- re-do the dark web overlay, isn't menacing enough
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